I changed it a bit! It helped me understand it more, and be more motivated!
Romans 12:1-2 “Therefore, I urge YOU, in view of God’s mercy, provision and love, to present/offer/surrender your WHOLE self (body, strength, thoughts, gifts, words, actions etc) as a living sacrifice, holy and pleasing to God (for Him to own) - this is your spiritual service of worship. Do not conform any longer to the trends/passions/desires of this world, but be transformed/metamorphosed by the constant renewal of your mind. Then you will be able to test and approve what God’s will is - His good, pleasing and perfect will.”